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Lv.1 코미 (104.♡.68.24)

2025년 9월 23일 PM 05:35 · 수정됨(19:31)

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 이건 영국이나 미국 7살도 어려울 거고, 난이도에 따라 중고등학생 문제도 되겠네요.

저 문제를 요구 조건에 맞춰 영작하면 이 정도 수준이 됩니다.


If I Could Invent Anything: The Matter Recombination Device


If I had the chance to invent anything, I would create a machine called the Matter Recombination Device. This device would be able to produce any object or material by rearranging atoms and molecules, as long as it was supplied with enough energy. People have always dreamed of a tool that could instantly provide food, clothing, shelter, and even medicine. With this invention, I believe humanity would enter a new stage of history, free from poverty, inequality, and endless conflict.


First of all, the most important benefit of the Matter Recombination Device would be the elimination of poverty. Today, billions of people still suffer from hunger and a lack of basic goods. With my invention, they would no longer need to worry about whether they could eat or sleep in a safe place. By simply providing energy, families could create nutritious meals, warm clothes, and clean houses. As a result, the cruel gap between the rich and the poor would begin to close.


Secondly, this device could also reduce conflict between nations. Many wars in history have been fought over resources such as land, oil, or minerals. If every country had the ability to produce anything they needed, there would be no reason to fight over limited supplies. Instead of competing for resources, nations could focus on cooperation, culture, and science. In this way, the device would not only solve economic problems but also contribute to global peace.


Finally, the Matter Recombination Device would encourage unity among people. When survival is no longer a daily struggle, individuals can pay more attention to education, creativity, and human relationships. They could spend more time developing their talents, helping others, and exploring the universe. The invention would make people realize that humanity shares a common destiny. By removing the barriers of poverty and conflict, it would allow us to act as one community.


In conclusion, the Matter Recombination Device would be more than just a scientific tool; it would be a symbol of hope for all humankind. By removing poverty, preventing wars, and encouraging unity, it would open the door to a brighter future. Of course, such an invention may sound like a dream today, but every great change in history once began as a dream. If I could invent anything, I would choose this machine, because it has the power to change the world for everyone.


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  • K

    Kaffe Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 211.♡.150.12

    모국어로 써도 발달 과정 상 무리일텐데요. 아동 학대입니다 저건
  • 세온 Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 175.♡.146.37

    7세면... 한국어로도 쓰기 힘든 수준 같은데요
  • 가자앞으로 Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 210.♡.148.176

    저는 한국어로 작성하라고 해도 못 할 것 같습니다. ㅠㅠ
  • BlueX

    BlueX Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 106.♡.128.58

    What the f....
    7세면 한글로 쓰라고 해도 힘들거 같은데요? 저걸 통과해야 학원에서 받아 준다는거죠? ㄷㄷㄷ
  • 왁스천사

    왁스천사 Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 125.♡.210.135

    저희 아이 영작 시험에도 저런 문제 나오더군요
    "자신의 삶에서 가장 빛나는 순간을 적어 보세요"

    삶이 10년도 안 된 애한테 대체 이게 뭔 짓인가 하고 와이프랑 좀 다퉜습니다.
  • 인현

    인현 Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 211.♡.199.46

    저 저런 글 쓰는 교육 미국 아이비리그 대학에서 대학생 때 어학연수 가서 배운 적 있습니다.
  • 0sRacco

    0sRacco Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 118.♡.81.21

    조카가 영어 유치원을 다녔고 지금은 초3인데 한국어를 제대로 못합니다. 남의 자식이니 본인들이 알아서 하겠지만 좀 거시기하더군요
  • tubebell

    tubebell Lv.1 → 0sRacco

    25.09.23 · 118.♡.3.114

    사고가 자라나는 건 모국어로 자라나는데
    어설픈 바이링구얼이 되면서 사고의 흐름이 방해 받기 때문이라 합니다.
  • 0sRacco

    0sRacco Lv.1 → tubebell

    25.09.23 · 59.♡.232.174

    1차적으로 현실의 사물, 속성에 대한 어휘가 부족해서 어휘량 자체가 부족하고 결합빈도가 높은 단어끼리의 조합을 못 만들더라구요. 안타까운 일인거죠
  • Peter

    Peter Lv.1

    25.09.23 · 116.♡.51.26

    이거 엄빠시험아니예요????

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